Food travels thousands of miles from producers to consumers. Some people think that it would be better for the environment and economy if people ate only the local food produced by farmers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In modern days, supermarkets are stocked with imported food goods. It is believed that people should consume locally produced food as it would have positive repercussions on the environment as well as the economy. I partially agree with this notion.
On the one hand, by transporting regionally cultivated food products to other nations, the local farmers are being benefited financially as their consumable merchandises are getting sold in a foreign currency in a way higher price in comparison to the local markets. Further, this trend has also contributed towards the nation's economy. Moreover, there are numerous food alternatives from multiple nations accessible to people. As a result, an individual can have access to a diversity of fruits and vegetables, which were never achievable in the past. The dragon fruit is an excellent illustration of this advancement as people in India have never even heard about this unique fruit earlier. However, now it has a place in nearly every neighbourhood shop and market.
On the other hand, undoubtedly, transporting food commodities from one nation to another has detrimental consequences on the environment because it involves the use of multiple types of transportation facilities such as air, water and road, which has not only intensified the product's price for consumers but also escalated the level of carbon dioxide into the atmosphere due to the massive utilization of vehicles that emit toxic fumes into the air. Furthermore, this inclination has also influenced local people to consume foreign cuisines. In many cases, they tend to eat foreign cuisines more than their traditional food, which is not a good practice for any nation's culture and traditional values.
In conclusion, while i agree that the global business of food products has financial perks for the local growers and also benefits for the people as it opens the gate for several food categories, it is steadily degrading the climate health as well as such food commodities are not pocket-friendly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, in many cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1718.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33540372671 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01934435564 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568322981366 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 112.802335365 49.4020404114 228% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 132.153846154 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7692307692 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1538461538 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237189158977 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781930974471 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.074912782909 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161447505076 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583770286647 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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