Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of using the Internet in our daily activities.
Moving towards the 21st century, many people are nowadays expressing a deeply growing concern about the role of the Internet in our life. In fact, there are some who hold firmly to their belief that the Internet has an important role in our contemporary life. However, others argue convincingly that the Internet brings some negative things for people. Therefore, some arguments both for and against this issue will be addressed in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, there are two main points for people to defend the former argument the Internet has an important role in modern lifestyles. First of all, it is a well-documented fact that the Internet helps all the people worldwide to approach education easier than in the past. The most obvious example to prove is that a student in Vietnam can learn at a school or a university in the US by E-learning. Furthermore, there is no doubt that the Internet brings people are nearer, and the distance does not matter now. For instance, we can talk with a foreigner by video call on an application, such as Facebook. We can make friends with a person lives in other countries.
On the other hand, there are two primary evidences for other people to support the latter argument the Internet effects in negative ways to people. First and foremost, it is commonly accepted that the Internet has a lot of information these are not guaranteed by the government or an organization. A clear example being found to prove is that we can see that there are over 1300 newspapers in Vietnam, but just 300 newspapers among that number we can belief. Equally important, there is no denying that people lose their information on the Internet. This is supported by the fact that there are about 100000 robbers who take the personal information of others to sell for money.
All things are considered, it is my strong belief that the Internet is so important in our daily activities. Accordingly, I strongly recommend the government should enhance people’s awareness in terms of the role of the Internet. If this recommendation is carried out, the comprehensive development of our future generations will be ensured.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 460, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Equally,
...papers among that number we can belief. Equally important, there is no denying that peo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, well, for instance, in fact, no doubt, such as, first of all, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 7.0 314% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 3.15609756098 444% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 5.60731707317 571% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 3.97073170732 378% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1803.0 965.302439024 187% => OK
No of words: 364.0 196.424390244 185% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9532967033 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 3.73543355544 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85197519777 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 106.607317073 176% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516483516484 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 562.5 283.868780488 198% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 8.94146341463 201% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.5759719047 43.030603864 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 100.166666667 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2222222222 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.88888888889 5.23603664747 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 3.70975609756 270% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15069015275 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0523656264017 0.103423049105 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601564206938 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106223337219 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585432675549 0.0819641961636 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 40.7170731707 201% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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