Some people think that there should be some strict controls about the noise. Others think that they could just make as much noise as they want. Discuss both these views and give your opinions
Moving towards the 21st century, many people are nowadays expressing a deeply growing concern about some essential measures should be applied to control noise in our life. In fact, there are some who hold firmly to their belief that they have the freedom to make noise as they like. However, others argue convincingly that it would be better to reduce noise. Therefore, some arguments both for and against this issue will be addressed in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, there are two main points for people to defend the former argument that people like to make as much noise as they want for various reasons. It is a well-documented fact that they feel more comfortable and relaxing when creating noise from different activities while working or entertaining. The most obvious example to prove is that turning up the volume louder to enjoy favorite songs make them relaxed after a long busy day, although it may disturb their next-door neighbors. Furthermore, there is no doubt that people often consider noise as a part of the industrialization and modernization process, therefore it is unavoidable. For instance, traffic or engine noise seems to have become more familiar with urban citizens. As a result, they feel that there are no particular reasons to control noise.
On the other hand, there are two primary pieces of evidence for people to support the latter argument that it is more beneficial to make some laws to strictly control voice. First and foremost, it is commonly accepted that noise has harmful impacts on people’s health. A clear example to prove is that some of my friends cannot sleep at night because of intrusive sounds from a nearby industrial zone. If this lasts a long time, it will be definitely lead to a deterioration in their mental and physical health. Equally important, there is no denying that the productivity of work may be reduced as a consequence of noise. This is supported by the fact that a lot of white-collar workers report that they cannot fully concentrate on their assignment because of the constant noise from vehicles in the street.
All things are considered, it is my strong belief that noise should be limited in order to have a better life. Accordingly, I strongly recommend the governments should enhance people’s awareness in terms of controlling noise in their life, it is a respect for society. If this recommendation is carried out, the comprehensive development of our future generations will be ensured.
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Suggestion: Equally,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in fact, no doubt, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2083.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 413.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04358353511 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88013688172 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542372881356 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 654.3 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8769900096 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.631578947 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7368421053 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.26315789474 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304576957292 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.089023008168 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057982277979 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189792214947 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0760896237318 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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