Some people think competitive sports, such as football, are valuable because they can gather people with different ages and cultures together. Some think competitive sports can cause problems because people are from different groups and countries. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Football is an old game, it was invented at the end of the 18th century, till today this sport ongoing and have billions of fans that support their favorite teams. Some people believe, that football is a great competition that can gather people from all over the world under one game, others think that it can lead to problems between people that support different groups and nations.
On one hand, football is a game played by all ages and a combination of players with different cultures and religious, that gather them. First, soccer or football will gather people under one spirit and thoughts, which is respect. Second, this game is branched in poor cities, where there are no differences in gender or color. However, each country has its own clubs that travel over the continents to play games and can meet their supporters, no matter from where they are. For example, two famous players, Cristiano Ronaldo and Leonel Messi, both a re the influencers for this generation and both made this game incredible, respectful between their fans. In my opinion, I think that football can gather, introduce people to each other’s, in order to share peace and fight against racism.
On the other hand, some people believe that competitive sports like football may lead to problems. First, some countries had fans that are so racist against other players or countries, and we can check the history of the game, when black players in some places in Europe where attacked and humiliated due to their colors. Second, some football supporters cannot accept their club or nation team to lose, especially during big games, they will ruin and damage everything in-front of them. Moreover, football is played in many neighborhoods and several fights happened in between and leads to gunshots or someone dies. For example, in World Cup 2018 in Russia, the England fans had a big fight between the local people and destroyed their shops, because of racism. From my point of view, I believe that this game is created to enjoy people and build respect in between.
As a conclusion, football is a game played by all ages, some people think it’s a valuable game and gather all cultures; others believe the opposite and cause problems. In my opinion, competitive games won’t destroy and make problems between groups or countries, it born respect and friendship with players, people and fans.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, for example, i think, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 10.4138276553 259% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2004.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 400.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47602377816 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 580.5 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.5867022917 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.25 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3125 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326595237229 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113746372937 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10376419906 0.0667982634062 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229057532107 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567263405207 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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