You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems.
Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter:
explain your situation
describe your problems
tell him/her when you think you can start
Dear Mr Simonton,
I hope this letter finds you well, As I am tackling with some problems that my car brought to me this week and I must commence my new career next week, therefore, I can’t to be there by the time we compromised.
Let me explain you in detail. Yesterday while I want to move my car which is vital for my transportation from our parking, I realized that it couldn’t turn on and it brings various troubles to me.
Furthermore, When I called for technicians to remedy my situation, they told me I have to wait until next monday to take back my car. So I cannot be available on that day in my new office.
Finally, I Probably will be there to start my new job the day after monday on 14th August. I hope you will consider my situation. Your assistance in this matter is greatly appreciated.
Your Sincerely,
Chi Chung
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 35, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... I hope this letter finds you well, As I am tackling with some problems that...
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Line 17, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...that day in my new office. Finally, I Probably will be there to start my new...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, so, therefore, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 716.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 156.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58974358974 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80098132517 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.653846153846 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 211.5 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.4646192916 44.8134815571 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5555555556 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 4.34317383033 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246358093077 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113262222806 0.0766984524023 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622990072216 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142438192375 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0787601367139 0.0580467560999 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.