The diagrams below show the changes that have been taken place at Queen Mary Hospital since its construction in 1960.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The rendered diagrams depict the alterations that have been taken place at a hospital named as Queen Mary from 1960 to 2000.
It can be clearly seen that, in the year 1960, there was a shopping center and a farmland which has been replaced by a cancer center, pharmacy and nursing school in the year 1980.Moreover, hospital and car parking have remained unchanged in both years.
Moving further, in the year 2000, the area of cancer center has been extended to the north and east directions, which has been resulted in the reduction in the sizes of nursing school and the car park. Whereas, in that year the location of the pharmacy and the hospital has remained unchanged.
Overall, throughout the time period of 1960 to 2000, a number of alterations has been taken place in the locality of Queen Mary hospital.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 180, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
...acy and nursing school in the year 1980.Moreover, hospital and car parking have remained...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 692.0 965.302439024 72% => OK
No of words: 142.0 196.424390244 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87323943662 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45201032557 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5141535478 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 75.0 106.607317073 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528169014085 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 193.5 283.868780488 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.8377039655 43.030603864 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.4 112.824112599 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4 22.9334400587 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 5.23603664747 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213731649466 0.215688989381 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134014835808 0.103423049105 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111577164129 0.0843802449381 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160733731351 0.15604864568 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109968837759 0.0819641961636 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.4329268293 149% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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