In many countries imprisonment is the most common solution to crimes. However, some people believe that better education will be a more effective solution. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In several countries, it is true that the most popular way to deal with crimes is prison punishment. Nevertheless, some people claim that education will be a more effective measurement, I partly agree with this view because of the following reasons.
On the one hand, I agree that detention camp is an appropriate place to educate criminals. For the sake of individuals, some people commit strict crimes. If these culprits were not put into prison, they would cause seriously negative effects on individuals and society as a whole. For instance, in some nations, authorities implicitly take (misappropriate) money from the national fund to accumulate it as their personal treasure. As a result, normal citizens are put in poverty and difficulties since their paying taxes are not used for public purposes such as healthcare, transport or education…etc.
On the other hand, I believe that education is also another resolution. The reason for this is that some adolescents make crime since they are not sufficiently educated. In fact, there are some children who are not well taken care by their parents since those people have to spend most of their time in making a living. Consequently, If those juveniles companion with bad peers they are more likely to involve in bad behaviors like robbing or stealing things. In this case, it seems to me that education is the effective way to these young criminals, which may help them to distinguish between the goods and evils.
In conclusion, while I agree that a prison sentence is necessary for some dangerous types of criminals, I do believe that education is a humanized and proper method to tackle with crime issues.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, may, nevertheless, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09420289855 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8923370899 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601449275362 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1679564479 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.153846154 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4615384615 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208573859836 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722347767162 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601490027894 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134136408209 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390999837368 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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