Many people think that the media should show more stories which report good news. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some individuals argue that journalists should inform more good news on the mass media instead of concentrating on providing bad information that may have negative impact on the readers. While I accept that this idea should be taken into account, I believe audience should also know other important news.
On the one hand, it is necessary to post more good stories on mass media including newspaper, radio, television and the Internet. Firstly, the fact that this modern world with many risks and dangers has gradually made human easily become upset and frustrated, and the busier lifestyle people involve with, the more calmness they possibly lost in their lives. Accordingly, I believe it would be better for people to frequently expose to good information rather than shock news so that their optimism can be nurtured and their confidence will be built. Moreover, one of the main responsibilities of any news agency is to educate people especially young individuals with the information provided. Hence, there should be more articles and columns focusing on positive contents and good role models in which the young generation can follow.
On the other hand, it is extremely important to warn citizens with negative information such as traffic accidents, natural disasters, plague, etc. The main reason is that there are many uncertainties around us and people should be equipped with effective ways to tackle in such circumstances. If those kinds of news are widely broadcasted on media, people can immediately take appropriate actions to solve the problem and authorities can also timely prepare emergency evacuation and provide aids when needed. For example, for years, thanks to the weather forecast on many means of media like radio programs or newspaper, citizens who are living in the central region of VietNam have been able to effectively deal with calamities like hurricane or flood, etc. Similarly, people can also know when they should take care of themselves to prevent from contracting diseases when there is an approaching epidemic affecting the community.
In conclusion, I believe that apart from increasing the amount of good news on media, it is vital for people to access to significant bad news so that individuals and governments can solve the problems efficiently.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, first, firstly, hence, if, may, moreover, similarly, so, while, apart from, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1942.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29155313351 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81870330375 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561307901907 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 606.6 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.4379867109 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.384615385 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2307692308 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4615384615 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230371659014 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0855725576578 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0421137993986 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148849085027 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307225139012 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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