You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
There have been some problems with the public transport you use to commute daily.
Write a letter to the manager of the public transport company. In your letter:
• describe the problems
• explain how these problems are affecting you and others
• suggest what could be done about it
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction of the poor quality of service of the public transport of your company from which we commute daily to office.
For the past one week the busses are making reoccurring delays in arriving at the bus stops due to which we reach after the scheduled office hours. Moreover, the planned busses are some times cancelled automatically as a result people including me have to look for other options of transportation such as either we have to book a taxi or we have to wait for other busses at the bus stops.
The other people including me have to suffer a lot because of these delays, as by reaching office late many people have received warning letters from their managers some of the individuals have also been relieved from their services. This is affecting both our professional jobs and as well as profession.
I would like to suggest you to increase the number of public transport to accommodate more number of passengers. Furthermore, please follow the timetable strictly so that no one is late for their work.
I hope you will take my suggestions into considerations and will undertake necessary actions. Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Your faithfully,
Prabhpreet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 166, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ved warning letters from their managers some of the individuals have also been relieved fro...
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Line 15, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on. Your faithfully, Prabhpreet Kaur
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, look, moreover, so, well, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1053.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96698113208 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82881649125 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622641509434 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 327.6 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.8330151146 44.8134815571 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.3 76.5299724578 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.7 4.34317383033 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198389612308 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681722416647 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559464506581 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105166762757 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448942920511 0.0580467560999 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 8.37731958763 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 8.71597938144 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.