You borrowed an important textbook during the last term from a classmate. You now realize your classmate has returned home overseas and you still have the book.
Write a letter to him/her. In your letter:
• apologize for the mistake
• find out how important the book is to him/her
• say what you will do
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Anna,
Hello, how are you? Hope you are having a joyous time. I am writing this letter to for not returning your book that I borrowed from you on time.
I borrowed the Advanced Marketing and Advertising book from you last week as the book was really important for me to prepare for my MBA exams. I promised to return the book after the exams, however, I forgot to do the same. I sincerely regret for not returning the book as promised.
Please let me know that if this book is really important for you in your studies and will help you in preparing your exams or else you can manage without this book.
I will post the book through direct airmail today itself to your house address and it will reach to you within a day or two, moreover, I will inform you the proof of delivery number so that you can track the package. Please inform me once you will receive the book.
I sincerely ask for forgiveness for the inconvenience caused to you for not giving back your book after my exams.
Keep in touch. See you soon.
Best Wishes,
Prabhpreet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 83, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...joyous time. I am writing this letter to for not returning your book that I borro...
^^
Line 5, column 144, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ant for me to prepare for my MBA exams. I promised to return the book after the e...
^
Line 5, column 225, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...xams, however, I forgot to do the same. I sincerely regret for not returning the ...
^
Line 17, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...u soon. Best Wishes, Prabhpreet Kaur
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 873.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45408163265 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26371979758 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55612244898 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 261.9 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.6726593915 44.8134815571 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.1538461538 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0769230769 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.53846153846 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.395775202596 0.216113520407 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150028968465 0.0766984524023 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0983944798957 0.0603063233224 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226327214564 0.12726935374 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0901251115678 0.0580467560999 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.72 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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