You have recently started work in a new company.
Write a letter to an English speaking friend. In your letter:
• explain why you changed jobs
• describe your new job
• tell him/her your other news
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write your own addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Julia,
Hi, how are how? Hope that you are having a joyous time. I am writing this letter to let you know that I have started a new job in mutual funds.
My previous two job was in Business Process Outsourcing which had a very hectic work schedule. It not only used to take one and half hours to reach to office but the working hours were also long which affected my social life. Moreover, the pay scale was low and the company did not have the policy of either providing promotion or giving a hike in the salary. So, I was planning to change my job to one that is more comfortable and provides ample opportunities of growth.
I have started my new job in IDFC Mutual Fund. The working hours are very comfortable and flexible. it 0akes just 20 minutes to reach there which is very convenient. Furthermore, there’s handsome remuneration package as well as the company provides the plethora of opportunities for the career enhancement. This company has a trend of appraising the work of the employees yearly with awards.
Additionally, I have enrolled in an MBA course via distance education from Amity University along with my job as this will aid me to escalate my knowledge and skills.
I hope you will take out some of your time to visit me in Canada. Hope to see you soon.
With Love,
Prabhpreet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 17, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'job' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'jobs'.
Suggestion: jobs
... job in mutual funds. My previous two job was in Business Process Outsourcing whi...
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Line 7, column 101, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...ours are very comfortable and flexible. it 0akes just 20 minutes to reach there wh...
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Line 13, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nada. Hope to see you soon. With Love, Prabhpreet Kaur
^^^^
Line 15, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ou soon. With Love, Prabhpreet Kaur
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1098.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 237.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63291139241 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65066233022 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599156118143 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 349.2 290.88556701 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8655171376 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.625 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8125 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 4.34317383033 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207641070014 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.06690205498 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757001231407 0.0603063233224 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122040998109 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0762263623374 0.0580467560999 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.98 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.