Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize
The importance of having a plan and the ability to organize the tasks in life is clear to every body. In modern societied, the importance of these skills has increased especially for younger people. young people have less experience in life and can get distracted easily. Thus, the ability of planning and organizing is substantial in their lives in order to lead to more welfare and prosperity in the future, mostly because of the following reasons.
First and foremost, there are many entertainments these days which can distract young people from their essential responsibilites and tasks in life. Suppose a teenager girl studying in college. she has to sudy hard in order to finish college successfully and then make her future. but instead, like most of the teenagers she will be distracted by fashion shows, celebrities' life and etc. which this pressure will increase by he sorrounding friends looking for these things, encouraging her to pay more attention to her look. this is a typical story for teengers these days. they attract to their hobbies and if they can not manage their time to reach their important tasks, their future will be influenced.
Secondly, developments in social media made many people spend much of their time on internet. many people are now addicted to internet. they spend plenty of their time on chatting about useless matters, playing computer games and competeing over nothing and many other attractive things that has no benefit in their life. The game industries are encouraging more kids and even adults to go in this way so as to make more profit. but the overall impact of these actions on future generations is not considered. In future there will be many people with no practical skill that should be responsible for jobs in communities. The future of these communities will be in a definite danger.
Aditionally, development of industrialization and technology made tasks in jobs more sophisticated and need a combination of different skills to accomplish in them. many of these skills should be gained from young ages when people have more free time to experience new things.
Taking all these into account, the importance of having a plan for life and organize daily tasks is obvious. One can not achieve prosperity in life without a plan especially in modern societies where there is too much competition between people over jobs and opportiunities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, thus, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2039.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 397.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13602015113 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83893285357 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513853904282 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 637.2 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3315809857 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6818181818 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0454545455 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.77272727273 5.45110844103 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208362174572 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650062785839 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670989746224 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141496306933 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100903942277 0.0645574589148 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.