University should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject.
To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays formal education increasingly plays a role to get degrees. it is widely believed that all the institutes should enroll equally both girls and boys at all levels of education. I partially agree with the equal participation of both gender in all subjects, as each field demanded different labor and ability.
it is clear that many fields like science, technology, mathematics dominated by men with a historically low-level of participation since the origin. each sector required the specialized expertise, skills, and personnel. however, it is favored that all universities should enroll an equal number of both men and women without considering its market potential resulted in a deficit of manpower necessary for the sector. for instance, it has seen that most females did not continue they're job after studying in the male-dominant sector such as civil, mining, etc. because of its labourist and outdoor task. Meanwhile, many other familial reasons would give to exaggerate the situation. Thus huge spending of the government on providing professional degrees without any discrimination resulted in the wastage of resources.
on the contrary, the significance of female contributions in different fields can never be denied. the recent population studies divulged that most of the countries have same-gender distribution. therefore in order to expedite the pace of development, all the institutions should pave the way for getting an education for all people without any discrimination. regarding the labouring field such as engineering the government, owner or any stakeholder should provide flexibility to the women. To sum up the scenario, this clearly explained the advocates and some consequence of the equivalent number of both males and females in each subject. however, these critics can be overcome if certain policymaker changes the paradigm of some field jobs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, regarding, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, such as, on the contrary, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1603.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54671280277 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13162361823 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626297577855 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3621010618 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.1875 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0625 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124906298354 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0343136434328 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043107862413 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0830308931353 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0075013111217 0.056905535591 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.61 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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