There is huge increase in the size of cities. Many cities have grown in a haphazard way why is careful planning important in the development of cities?
many countries keen desired to organize international sports functions. However, many other countries make several arguments against it. this essay will consider not only the benefits for the economy and recognition of the country worldwide but also describe the issues accompanied by organizing these events.
In terms of benefits, they claimed that it creates a significant impact on the economy of the country. this is because it helps to generate much revenue. Additionally, according to them, it provides a valuable platform for gaining the attention of developed countries. The reason for believing this approach it would have paved the way for increasing the opportunity of foreign investment in they're area.
In contrast to the above-provided advantages, there are many drawbacks to hosting these sports events in developing countries. Firstly, the country has a limited allocated budget for sports and tourism. they often refer to the fact the money spending for the wellbeing of citizens, the organizer squandering it for arranging the security of international guests. Secondly, developing countries, in particular, the transportation of the host city affected by it. For instance, the road led to the sports complex only restricted for the visitor only and casual traffic does not allow to use it for a commute that resulted in creating massive road congestion in the city.
In my opinion, I believe that countries having the least institutional capacity and limited economic resources should focus on reducing the scourge of hunger and terror in their country rather on organizing these events.
To conclude that although hosting these foreign sports event can bring huge profit to the country but in case of any the mismanagement by the least experience country has led to myriad of serious consequences that will have a negative effect on the reputation of the country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Many
many countries keen desired to organize inte...
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Suggestion: This
...t impact on the economy of the country. this is because it helps to generate much re...
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Line 5, column 393, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: they're
...he opportunity of foreign investment in theyre area. In contrast to the above-pro...
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Line 9, column 204, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: They
...llocated budget for sports and tourism. they often refer to the fact the money spend...
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Line 9, column 583, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'using'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: using
... only and casual traffic does not allow to use it for a commute that resulted in creat...
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...al traffic does not allow to use it for a commute that resulted in creating massive road ...
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Line 13, column 49, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...ude that although hosting these foreign sports event can bring huge profit to the coun...
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Line 13, column 277, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ffect on the reputation of the country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, in contrast, in particular, in contrast to, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39393939394 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95875121533 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565656565657 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.6481479282 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.428571429 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2142857143 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92857142857 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0928875629755 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0353603639961 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402613646537 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0483138494781 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0172934285808 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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