Some people think young people are not suitable for important positions in the government，while other people think it is a good idea for young people to take on these positions. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Some people argue that it is better elderly to take responsible for important rolls, such as government jobs. However, others believe that it is the time for the young to take over the jobs. This essay will discuss both sides of points and provide my opinion on this topic.
A number of people still prefer to deal with issues with older people, which are experienced officers, when it comes to government related work. The reason why they think this way is that they would be more familiar with the job, therefore they could make flexible decisions compared to the younger, un-experienced workers. For example, if someone got delayed on paying tax, and visit government office to pay it off, the younger officer might ask person to pay fine, to follow the exact protocol, however, senior officer will just give warning and take the tax to make the situation smooth.
Despite these arguments, many people today think that the young generation should take over the important duties, they believe that the young one’s are better stick with the regulations and job descriptions than the elderlies. The issue of conflict of interest is often happened among senior officers, because they think the relationship is more important than the job requirements, thus, the young should take the important rules which they can be strict with laws.
To sum up, the government job is indeed important and should be maintained by heavy rules, I do too, believe with all the reasons above, the young people should take over the main part of critical duties as our society has changed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...les which they can be strict with laws. To sum up, the government job is indeed ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, still, therefore, thus, for example, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1326.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00377358491 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44832678023 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57358490566 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.1584935787 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.333333333 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4444444444 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292310792778 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128419056548 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0775084735533 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18584243471 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0738306092783 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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