Science and technology will one day be able to solve all of society’s problems.
new", monospace; font-size: 16px; white-space: pre-line; background-color: rgb(247, 247, 249);">although a human's life can improve with the use of technology, technology cannot solve all issues. Indeed, technology and science cna create new issues and displace older ones. For example, socialization is not improved by technology. Either issues are made worse, or change in shape while lacking improvment. Addiitonally, transportation is the prefect example as to why technology is like mother nature's evolution--we more forward and extend our past issues into our futures. First, consider the use of ai. Films imagine a perfect utopia where ai exsits to meet the needs of the human-master. There are stacks of articles from publications such as the new York times and the Washington Post that untangle the purpose of ai in romtaic relationships. To form a bond between equals, both minds must have similar rights and access to education. society expects that the minds can provide informed concent so that the romatic bond will be beween equals instead of a master and a slave. In reality, an antisocial person that seeks out love may choose to corner and contain an enslaved robot. this person is no better for thier actions. The person instead uses the technology to excuse any failure to improve thier personality or behaviour; the person is not improved--thier lowly actions are only rewarded and thier hunger satiated. Moreoever, the most popular service robots are designed with bias in mind. service robots, like Alexa and Siri use women's voices. Althoguh the robots do not have gender, we, in all our arcaicness, limit our technology by our own cultures. When we assume the future, we think of of all issues and incoviences solved by the press of a magical button. we forget that even a fancy hunk of tech is just a more complex tool. If the ant-eater may only use its tongue to find its meals in dirt mounds, we may belive ourselves clever for using a stick to accomplish the same goal. The stick itself may improve. Over time, we may forge metal, or use lasers to locate our crawling meals. The act of consuming the ant is flashy and futuristic, yet the action is still the same--we use something new to eat ants. we may create more service industry robots that do exactly what we can already do oursevles. we already live in a society that assumes women are servents. creating a compact metal-servent in the form of a woman has not improved our lives. we have just repainted our issues using science. Moreover, we can create technology that is limited by systems already set into place. Each year, a tech-billionaire recreates the car. this time, the car is sleek and immaginative on the surface. The issue is, the car will still move the same amount of people from location A to location B. The car is less effective than the railroad. Lines of cars stretch across the American landscarpe--major cities regularly suffer bumper to bumper traffic. instead of improving life using a mode of transportation that is more effective, we, limited like evolution shaped by mother nature. can only progress with our faliures. The whale keeps the hip bone and we keep a mode of transporation that takes up a great deal of space while only transporting one to four people. although technology looks beautiful, it stems from an older way of being. technology does not awlays improve our issues. technology can protect our outdated modes of thought about socilization and transportation by allowing us to falsley believe we are more evolved than we actually are.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 33.0505617978 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 58.6224719101 116% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2976.0 2235.4752809 133% => OK
No of words: 597.0 442.535393258 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98492462312 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.94303383012 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89508298975 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 333.0 215.323595506 155% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557788944724 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 949.5 704.065955056 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 12.0 4.99550561798 240% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 38.0 20.2370786517 188% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.453821198 60.3974514979 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.3157894737 118.986275619 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7105263158 23.4991977007 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.42105263158 5.21951772744 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.97078651685 20% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 7.80617977528 231% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 10.2758426966 195% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.83258426966 248% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113934094329 0.243740707755 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0237291643957 0.0831039109588 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380089750928 0.0758088955206 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113934094329 0.150359130593 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667264976115 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 14.1392134831 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 48.8420337079 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 155.0 100.480337079 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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