Some people think that money is the best gift for teenagers. Others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Teenagers in the present generation are always running behind the money to spend lavishly for various purposes.Some use it for good and some use it for bad.I would discuss both the views from my point of view.
In the past,parents used to provide everything their kid needs by taking time for them but at present day parents are so busy earning money and have no time for children they just don't think of buying what the their child needs instead they just give money.Teenagers when they don't know on what to spend so much money they start doing wrong things or buying things which are not needed for them.Like such as a teenager was given money he starts going to clubbing taking friends on rides,Drinking habits all have started at this early age as he doesn't know for what the money has to spend for.In return people who are giving the money are spoiling their life.These are the major signs of spoiling the future of teenagers.
There are very few teenagers who also think beyond their age like for example there was a teenager whose parents were very rich and he was always given money how much he wanted but he never used it for wrong purposes he instead used to give feed people on roads and give some amount of money to orphanage and saved the rest of the money to buy books for his friends.So there are some teenagers who knows to spend the money wisely.
In my point of view would say that money is given in right amount if they are in need for right purpose because if they continue to get money at present later in the future when they are independent and hard to get money they start stealing money and threaten people for money.So it is always best to give them the money if they are in need and educate them to spend wisely and correctly for the right purpose
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, as to, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1460.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46483180428 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17548366901 2.80592935109 78% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467889908257 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 81.0 20.2975951904 399% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 182.212787696 49.4020404114 369% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 365.0 106.682146367 342% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 81.75 20.7667163134 394% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.5 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277525803258 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.19188791309 0.084324248473 228% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0250797646071 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19188791309 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250797646071 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 40.5 13.0946893788 309% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 6.18 50.2224549098 12% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 32.5 11.3001002004 288% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 9.77 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 34.4 10.1190380762 340% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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