Plastic shopping bags contribute to the pollution of land and sea, some think they should be banned. Do you agree or disagree? Give examples of your knowledge.
Bags which are made of plastic cause pollution issues; Some people want rules which ban them. This essay thinks that is not needed forbiding these kind of bags because that will cause another broplem which is addding the cost of healthy bags to total cost; I addtion, following safe methods after finshing of using plastic bags will stop any harmful impatcs on environment.
Any governmental steps toward preventing using plastic bags will cause new issue which is that consumers will be not able to defray the expensive cost of bags which is made of paper. The high price of healthy bags could affects on the price of items; in other words, the owners of shops will add the cost of health bags to the price of goods and that will not be postive result. In 2010, the Yemeny government issued a law enforces resturants selling their products with pags and cans are made of specific kind of paper and wood, but unfortuntlly that leaded to increasing in the prices of food.
Instead casuing double broplem by preventing using plastic, It is recommanded that following healthy habit in throwing plastic pags after using them is the best way in keeping our life healthier. As long as the plastic bags are taken to the suitable place after using them, the society will be safe. For more clarification, a study was conducted by Cario Universty; in 2012, showed that deleterious effects were done by plastic pags could be avoided if they will be taken to special junkyards.
In conclusion, this article belives that stoping usin plastic pags is not effective sulotion. The reason of this is that will lead to rising in prices of items by addding the cost of healthy bags to total cost beside the environment could be safer if with following good habit in leaving plastic bags after using them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, in conclusion, kind of, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84838709677 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37315238391 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516129032258 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.2972174727 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.3 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0 20.7667163134 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155941044468 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0747611301127 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0347582328551 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106709890391 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0184387438871 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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