In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development? You should use your own ideas, knowledge an

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...ies to study a university degree abroad.This essay will discuss both the benefits an...
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...mes outweighing negative impacts.Firstly,students when exposed to abroad countries they c...
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...y can learn local culture and lifestyle.Also,students will be able to speak multi la...
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...ferent places will create globalisation.For example,India is a country where agricu...
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...ere agriculture is the major occupation.Students who studiedabroad can implement various...
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...ernational experiences. By contrast,there are very few drawbacks to argue with th...
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...anges or improvements made globally i.e.,in other words,they donot like to share th...
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...hings from their neighbouring countries.This will be explained as, most of students ...
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...ather than studying in ones own country.I believe that,there are various benefits...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, for example, in conclusion, as a result, in other words

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1489.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.12757201646 5.12529762239 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.14168040425 2.80592935109 148% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646090534979 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 60.0 20.2975951904 296% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 218.536610205 49.4020404114 442% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 372.25 106.682146367 349% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 60.75 20.7667163134 293% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 28.75 7.06120827912 407% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 5.01903807615 598% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268432109348 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174922987822 0.084324248473 207% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596964986061 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174922987822 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596964986061 0.056905535591 105% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 37.8 13.0946893788 289% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -6.34 50.2224549098 -13% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.1 11.3001002004 258% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 19.16 12.4159519038 154% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.75 8.58950901804 137% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.5 9.78957915832 322% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.0 10.1190380762 257% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 26.0 10.7795591182 241% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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