Nowadays people prefer to get married and have children in their 30s/30’s rather than when they are younger.
Is it positive or negative development?
Do you agree or disagree?
To what extent do you disagree/agree?
In the present time individuals prefer marrying and have children in their late 30s rather than when they are younger. In my opinion I do believe that it is a positive trend as people are not only financially and professionally stable but they also develop a sense of maturity which are the foundation stone for a married life.
At the onset, for a person to get married and have children should have a sense of responsibility, understanding and maturity to take to support the family emotionally as well as to teach their children moral and ethical values and aid them in being a good citizen. To be more precise, If people are not mentally stable they will not understand the situation well, moreover, will not be able to take decisions practically and thus will end their marriage. To exemplify, according to the recent report 80 percent of the divorces happen because of immature nature and less understanding level of the partners.
Furthermore, people prefer to marry and have children in the late 30s as they are able to have a prosperous career and financial strength to support their family in terms of providing education and a comfortable life Simply stating, if people are working in good companies and have a good bank balance they will be able to fulfill all the needs and desires of their family. To elucidate, people marrying without having financial security leads to more conflicts an tensions which not only affects their relationships but also hampers the growth of children.
To conclude, I vehemently agree that marriage and have children is the paramount decision of one's life and one should take this decision rationally by considering long-term aspects as mentioned in this essay.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 463, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Line 5, column 463, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an tension' or simply 'tensions'?
Suggestion: an tension; tensions
...ancial security leads to more conflicts an tensions which not only affects their relationsh...
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, thus, well, as to, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98606271777 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81592173055 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529616724739 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.0486781195 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 178.875 106.682146367 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.875 20.7667163134 173% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.75 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264392205245 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119537432319 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0908398696069 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1628201724 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0953481081504 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.0 13.0946893788 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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