You recently organized an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch.
- Say what the participants liked about the hotel
- Explain why they were unhappy about the hotel
- Suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future
Dear Sir,
My Name is Harsha Vardhan and I organized a meeting at your Hotel recently. I am writing this letter to provide feedback on hospitality and few suggestions for improvement.
To begin with, I arranged an all-day meetup in your hotel dated 10th December. It was a very great stay and my teammates liked the ambiance of the hotel. In addition to that, the lake view from the hotel is awesome and it makes your hotel experience better from others.
Although the hospitality is very good, most of our colleagues complained about the lunch. The menu was very concise with south Indian items, we didn’t have enough choice to make on food. On the other hand, the food lacks taste especially the Hyderabad style biryanis.
By considering the above feedback, I request to make a good balance on the food types like south, north and international dishes. It will be good if you can arrange a live kitchen counter so that visitors can have the privilege to order their items with their custom style.
I hope you consider the feedback and improve the arrangements next time.
Yours Faithfully,
Harsha Vardhan
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, in addition, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 954.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99476439791 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6245149506 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.675392670157 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.4696802554 44.8134815571 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9166666667 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41666666667 4.34317383033 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249761620238 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0801000785549 0.0766984524023 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472800172983 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119560837472 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645972852912 0.0580467560999 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.