In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing
high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young
people who decide to do this.
in various nations people are encouraged to work or travel in a gap year before starting secondary education,
there are many advantages of such choices whereas disadvantage are been considering in this essay.
fristly people work or travel before their higher education through that people can expand their horizon,whereas people go for overseas
so they can experience new customs and culture,as they can get knowledge about the world,in addition students can work while studying
and they realize the value of money. consequently people can have their valuable ideas of work and travelling experience
however, there are few drawback should be considered,people work far from home,gets homesick and they get depression by thinking of their parents and friends.
additionally where they may mislead by their prior work which make them forget about their education. the money and worldly pleasure changes the circumstances of students
to forget about their education hence it is important to complete their graduation before they work or travel around the world.
in conclusion,it is important that people should explore their horizon and encouraged by work or travel in gap year consequently disadvantages are been consider
higher than the advantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, hence, however, may, second, so, whereas, while, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1112.0 1207.87684729 92% => OK
No of words: 192.0 242.827586207 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.79166666667 5.00649968141 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.92707691288 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95274835929 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 139.433497537 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572916666667 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 379.143842365 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6551724138 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.5024630542 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.3523288019 50.4703680194 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 185.333333333 104.977214359 177% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.0 20.9669160288 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.8333333333 7.25397266985 204% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.12807881773 242% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 20.0 5.33497536946 375% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182664301616 0.242375264174 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108119856382 0.0925447433944 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704317757 0.071462118173 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.086876571777 0.151781067708 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0690503414401 0.0609392437508 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.8 12.6369458128 173% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.54 53.1260098522 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 10.9458128079 155% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.89 11.5310837438 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 55.0591133005 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.94827586207 201% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.3980295567 142% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.5123152709 162% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.