Children are now less active in their free time than in the past. Therefore, sports lessons
must be compulsory in schools. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons
for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or
experience
These days, more and more children are less active in their free time than in the past. It has been suggested that sports lessons must be compulsory in schools. I totally agree with this statement for reasons I will outline below.
From an overall perspective, there are wide range of reason why people believe that sports lessons must be compulsory in school. From a practical point of view, the primary argument supporting this idea is that playing exercise or sport will help children enhance their health or even their mindset. If they enjoy exercise more frequently, they will receive more benefit from exercise such as mood booster, which very important thing to reduce stress from along time of study. From a social point of view, another key argument in supporting of this idea is that playing sport also allow children learn how to make teamwork, which is very important skill children have to have if they want to become successful in the future.
However it must be said there are several arguments against the idea that studying or reading book will bring in children knowledge. Perhaps sports lessons can cause problems about scratches in children’s body.
In conclusion, it must be said that Children are now less active in their free time than in the past has become a complex issue with no easy solution. Overall, I would have to say that I strongly agree with that idea that sport lessons must be compulsory in school, because of many benefit of that bring in.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1247.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9094488189 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40273626232 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535433070866 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9287496607 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.363636364 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0909090909 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09090909091 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231413026836 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100982763689 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677384009403 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160482278478 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0691035748349 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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