The world’s governments and organizations are facing a lot of issues. Which do you think is the most pressing problem for the inhabitants on our planet? Give solution.
In this modern world, governments and international organizations are facing many global problems. While some people think that global warming is a major threatening problem these days, which gives more pressure to the governments and international companies, I differ from this opinion and argue about current global crisis and its adverse effects on our society as described below.
To start with, there are many people argue that one of the major challenges around the world are global terrorism and racism. Many countries such as India and Pakistan are facing serious challenges in the form of terrorism. Their major focus is that young people are brain faded on such practices on the basis of religion and caste. For example, Pakistan provides training to the people, especially young people, about the terrorism. Therefore, governments should spend extra fund in border to increase the security force higher and try to protect their territory.
Secondly, governments and international companies are facing other global issues to eradicate poverty and malnutrition. For example, an international governing body, called WHO, states that the death rate of children and women are now a surge due to under nutrition in low income countries. Additionally, due to high unemployment rate, elder people suffer for a daily living, which in turn results in poverty. Thus, governments should take a necessary action to reduce poverty by means of increasing employment opportunities and providing extra benefits to poverty people.
In conclusion, I second my outlook of spending more money by governments and international organization can reduce the pressing issues that we face today despite minor drawbacks, but how far those issues will become reduce completely is always debatable.
- The world’s governments and organizations are facing a lot of issues. Which do you think is the most pressing problem for the inhabitants on our planet? Give solution. 77
- The world’s governments and organizations are facing a lot of issues. Which do you think is the most pressing problem for the inhabitants on our planet? Give solution. 77
- Large shopping malls are replacing small shops What is your opinion on this Do you think this is a good or bad change 84
- What do you think is the most important invention for the past 100 years，antibiotics, airplane, or computers? And why? 77
- Some people point that experiential learning (i.e. learning by doing it) can work well in formal education. However, others think a traditional form of teaching is the best. Do you think experiential learning is beneficial in high schools or colleges? 77
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1207.87684729 127% => OK
No of words: 275.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.59272727273 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90601200705 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610909090909 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 379.143842365 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.1614434314 50.4703680194 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.166666667 104.977214359 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9166666667 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.25397266985 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 6.9802955665 14% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 2.75862068966 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178758806616 0.242375264174 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605618077097 0.0925447433944 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455119926559 0.071462118173 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103673180476 0.151781067708 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473965703693 0.0609392437508 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 12.6369458128 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.44 11.5310837438 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 55.0591133005 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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