The world’s governments and organizations are confronting multiple issues. Which do you think is the most pressing problem for the inhabitants on our planet.
In this modern world, there is an ongoing deliberation among people on the problems faced by the inhabitants on our planet. While some people argue that the main problem faced by the inhabitants is environmental pollution, on my point of view I agree with this statement. In this essay, I shall discuss factors effect on environmental pollution while analyzing both sides of the argument.
First and foremost, environmental pollution can be divided into three segments, air, water and soil pollution. For instance, increase in vehicles will increase vehicular pollution and equipment which use CFC gas also adversely contribute for green house effect. Increase of using coal power would also dilute the ozone layer while exposing people to the sun beams directly. In addition, some factories release there waste water to the natural water resources creating problems in finding clean drinking water to the majority of the population. Apart from that, pesticides and weedicides pollute the soil while creating threats to the insects in th e soil.
In conclusion, governments has to impose rules and regulations to mitigate environmental pollution. Moreover, they can encourage farmers in using carbonic fertilizer instead of chemicals. Finally, both governments and individuals has to take initiatives in using sustainable energy sources such as wind power, sea wave and hydro power in energy generation to mitigate the risk of these problems.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, moreover, so, while, apart from, as to, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.5418719212 28% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1227.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 224.0 242.827586207 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47767857143 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91776848418 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638392857143 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.460967763 50.4703680194 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.545454545 104.977214359 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3636363636 20.9669160288 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5454545455 7.25397266985 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10555909895 0.242375264174 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0392531239881 0.0925447433944 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567580360391 0.071462118173 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0671462769169 0.151781067708 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381157288438 0.0609392437508 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 11.5310837438 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.32886699507 119% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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