The world’s governments and organizations are facing a lot of issues. Which do you think is the most pressing problem for the inhabitants on our planet and give the solution?
These days, a lot of pressing problems have increased among governments and organizations. While most of the people think that poverty and other necessary problems such as water, food and shelter, I differ from this opinion and argue that environmental pollution is a most pressing problem, which can be part of the inhabitants on our planet. This essay discusses the problem and will lead to a logical solution.
At the outset, there are many arguments to support my stance, but the most preponderant one is that environmental pollution play a vital role in complicating the life of people in our planet. Not only these pollution creates in making people's life dreadful, but also impacts the people by causing health issues. For example, people, who live in Delhi, face more health related issues because of poor air quality that spoiled by environmental pollution which factories or large industries can be part of. Therefore, it acts as a most pressing issues among people, and government and international organizations should concentrate on this issues and address it as described below.
Government has an authority power to change anything. They are the major player to discuss this issues by making strict laws to avoid unnecessary pollution. For example, government should revisit the laws in banning the large factories, who are part of Air and Water pollution. Similarly, they should focus on other areas where source of pollution can be part of our environment. Thus, government and other organizations ought to make the policies, and people should follow the same. Both must go hand in hand.
From what has been discussed above, one can conclude that solution of the problem is prominent. Hence, there is a line between use and abuse, and people should think and act accordingly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 202, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this pollution' or 'these pollutions'?
Suggestion: this pollution; these pollutions
... life of people in our planet. Not only these pollution creates in making peoples life dreadful...
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Line 5, column 633, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...nal organizations should concentrate on this issues and address it as described belo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, hence, if, similarly, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 8.36945812808 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1518.0 1207.87684729 126% => OK
No of words: 293.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18088737201 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83355390128 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559726962457 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.931034482759 537% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.4127357145 50.4703680194 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.2 104.977214359 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5333333333 20.9669160288 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 7.25397266985 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245037984164 0.242375264174 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722632861853 0.0925447433944 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062528680445 0.071462118173 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145231099938 0.151781067708 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0808883947007 0.0609392437508 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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