In some countries levels of health and fitness are decreasing and average weights are increasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what are some possible solutions?
In a few countries, the condition of health and fitness are declined and weights are escalating. This essay will discuss both causes and solutions in detail.
The most important cause for reducing the condition of health and fitness is the hectic lifestyle. These days people are going to the workplace at wee hours to expected do work more to improve their economic status. Because of the busy schedule in their life plus due to the strain they are not concentrating on health and also physical fitness in their life. Furthermore, sedentary lifestyle leads to obesity in their life. For example, a recent study reveals, who are inactive stage those are more prone to get obesity, compared to other physical work. This results in the level of health and fitness decreasing.
An initiative solution for this is to raise awareness about health and fitness. Most people are obsessed with a sedentary lifestyle. so, they cannot perform any exercise, because of lack of interest as well as time. In addition to this, unhealthy pursuits like having instant cooking foods, alcohol consumption, smoking. So, create awareness in the people mind through advertisements. Furthermore, fitness facilities implementation at the workplace, which leads to improve the output of the companies as well as improve the health and fitness of the individual. For instance, a recent study reveals that companies with fitness centres output are high compared to other companies who are not having fitness facilities.
To sum up, the level of health and are declining and obesity is increasing because of the busy schedule in human life. In my opinion, the implementation of the fitness centres is good for citizens by the government to improve their health and fitness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, as well as, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17957746479 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79060569817 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.1938265397 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5294117647 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7058823529 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41176470588 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146976219845 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0520719885118 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463762811178 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104376406494 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029000415654 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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