With the increasing use and development of new technology,many machines are now able to do the work which people used to perform.
Nowadays each individual is used to have all technology which makes our everyday life easier.Moreover modern machines not only help us, but also make ,most of the time our work for us.At the same time people become lazy day by day, however they don't want to do even if the most simple houswork.
By one side with all these machines and better known as robots people become more and more indolent .They don't want to do their own work They start to think that robots will earn money for their lifes too.Another issue that people can not live without them they become dependent and don't imagine their each day without this machines.It can have influence to some mental disease.
On the other hand ,these type of machines are really useful on factorys because of saving time and increasing amount of work .One good example is people by hand can make 3 details of something per hour, at the same time owing to robots we can have 3000 of the same details during the hour.Secondly, most of robots can do what people can not to do,and we have more opportunities to new inventions or upgrade old things and make something new.
All in all, year by year number oc machines increasing rapidly.Advantages of engaging machins overweight disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1029.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 216.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76388888889 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61701460296 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601851851852 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 327.6 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 54.0 20.2975951904 266% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 120.940067802 49.4020404114 245% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 257.25 106.682146367 241% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 54.0 20.7667163134 260% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.25 7.06120827912 287% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204202849243 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117277559537 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0318075119015 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117277559537 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318075119015 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.0 13.0946893788 214% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 25.13 50.2224549098 50% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.2 11.3001002004 205% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.22 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 78.4519038076 42% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.6 10.1190380762 233% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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