Children have responsibility to take care of their old family members, but some people say that old
people should not need to live with their families. What is your opinion?
The life structure of a human being is that at some point they require people to take care of them
and at some points they need to help others. I have shared certain points pertaining to if or not
children should take care of old family.
Firstly, any kid a support is required to grow up, this support reduces as and when the kid grows up,
but there would be time where they will have to return the support and it would be abominable if
that youngster abdicates towards old family member. Being a kid our day to day activities was
repeatedly trained by our elders with patient, we need to give it back to them. For Instance, my
friend was brought-up by his grandparents and he feels responsible to take care of them. My point
being for the view is that his duty towards his grandparents is justified.
Secondly, despite some people feel that old family members need not live with family, they posses
morals which is required for younger generations. I believe that life is a circle and that we can also
become old, what we do will happen to us. We should set examples for our future generation by
showing them that we take care of our elders, In this way we take care of our future by taking care
of our elders. One Incidence is that when my father was angry at my grandfather for an unknown
reason to me, I too was angry at him as I stereotyped his thought process. I reassessed my thinking
towards people and decided not to separate older family members for any particular issues.
To sum up life of children and old family member is intertwined and if people are kept aside because
of old age, it would be inhumane and that it should be avoided.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: And
...y require people to take care of them and at some points they need to help others...
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Message: This is a non-standard phrase. Did you mean 'whether or not'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 24.0651302605 220% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1392.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54901960784 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42418688334 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.5373594737 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 18.0 4.38176352705 411% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223529737704 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0919533604576 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0698473059187 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0815040296963 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0798395948014 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.