What should a government do for a country to become successful?
The success of any country always depends on the government which controlling it. Most rich countries nowadays become developed because of the efforts of their government. There are several sectors that government should concern to develop to be a success. This essay will explain the ways and what sectors should improve to become the success of the country.
First of all, the Government should improve the economy of the country with a long term plan. There are a lot of foreign investors and local investors who are able to invest the money on behalf of our countries’ economy but they are scared of investing in a country where rules and regulations aren’t stable. In my point of view is that, if the government ensure their security and provide them with a considerable taxes, then they will be able to invest some different companies and industrial sectors which can help to improve the economy
Secondly, most important sectors are considered as the education system and health service which is very important to the success of the country. People with higher educational background and knowledge would be more important to society by developing and improving educational departments and sound educational system. Also providing more hospitals, pharmacies, doctors and best paramedic system can be essential for the country. If the government spared those basic services around the world by establishing them people will more happy and easy for their life.
Finally, the government should pay attention on the law and regulations which give to the people’s safety and security. Most of the police departments have become critical and crucial to the people nowadays, they always break the law than citizens do. So, that’s why the government must more aware and pay attention on the police departments and introduce the specific system to control the citizens and security of the country.
Overall, I believe that the government have the most important roll in the country to develop it and control it. Most of the developed countries have become successful and people having sophisticated life because of their government’s paramount service.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1852.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35260115607 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87852130922 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488439306358 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 574.2 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.6049149409 49.4020404114 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.466666667 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0666666667 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.73333333333 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340980506071 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125276860768 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0763267905669 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190030307936 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115973169714 0.056905535591 204% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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