Parents are responsible for the behavior of the children. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is that parental responsibilities play a vital role in a part of the behavior of the children. There is widespread worry that this will lead to a myriad of problems among parents and children. In my opinion, this apprehension is warranted and merits serious consideration.
There are many arguments in favor of my stance. The most preponderant one is that it plays an integral role in enhancing the cognitive skill of children. Not only these children grow with good attitudes but also becomes in gaining a number of benefits such as good humanism, which is impossible if parents are not involved such kinds of controlling act. Needless to say, all these merits stand children in good stead, as far as behavioral control and under the guidance of parents is concerned.
Another pivotal aspect of this argument is that children become goal achievers and it helps their studies too. Besides, due to changing small behavior on the children, it can lead to a good lifestyle among them. Hence, it is apparent why many are in favor of the parent responsibilities act for the behavior of the children.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that the benefits of the behavior of the children that are controlled by parents are indeed too great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, if, so, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1114.0 1207.87684729 92% => OK
No of words: 225.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95111111111 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88695319765 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 139.433497537 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546666666667 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 342.9 379.143842365 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9222201154 50.4703680194 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.272727273 104.977214359 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4545454545 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.18181818182 7.25397266985 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247503983501 0.242375264174 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0999949589935 0.0925447433944 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0826666029341 0.071462118173 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163129937319 0.151781067708 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440174178787 0.0609392437508 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 12.6369458128 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 55.0591133005 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.5 Out of 90
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