Some people say companies should require all employees to wear uniforms at work. Others think it is unnecessary.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion
In the modern times, employees are compelled to wear uniforms at work by some companies. Although it is often argued that staffs are not required to wear unified cloths at work, I believe that organizations should enforce the practice of having a dress code to be followed by all employees.
On the one hand, people with the view that uniforms is not essential at work is because comfortability concern. This is because some employees often dislike to be obliged to wear a certain cloths which they might not feel comfortable wearing whole day, such as: suits, same shirt color, or tie, which leads to them feeling not fulling low relieved at their work as a result, it can affect their performance. However, I believe that not having an uniformed dress at work will lead to an appearance oriented culture at companies.
Despite this, there are those who say that organizations should require staff to wear their standard dress code because of work environment. That is to say that once individuals’ gets a job in a company they should wear the existing uniform as per the internal rules to ensure that all staff are equal and no appearance judgement exists, this will results in a professional appearance of companies. For example, some companies are being judged of their professionalism by the existing of dress code policy internally. Therefore, I believe that uniforms at work are better for professional work environment.
In conclusion, although some say that forcing employees to wear uniforms at work is not required because it might lead to comfortability matters for them, I believe that requiring all staffs to wear a unified dress code at work place is needed as it makes the work environment appears more professional.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 292, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Line 5, column 150, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'dislike being'.
Suggestion: dislike being
...n. This is because some employees often dislike to be obliged to wear a certain cloths which ...
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Line 5, column 190, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'cloth'?
Suggestion: cloth
...dislike to be obliged to wear a certain cloths which they might not feel comfortable w...
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Line 5, column 444, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...nce. However, I believe that not having an uniformed dress at work will lead to an...
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Line 9, column 354, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'result'
Suggestion: result
... appearance judgement exists, this will results in a professional appearance of compani...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05517241379 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94133079962 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489655172414 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.1236710215 49.4020404114 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.6 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331224737828 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159760678158 0.084324248473 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656694731798 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240569566473 0.151304729494 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378816388896 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.66 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.