Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally
Discuss both sides and give your opinion
Environment is known as a cradle of life of all creatures around the world can be undeniable that environment gives people a lot of benefits. However, nowadays, our environment is becoming more and more contaminated day by day. Environment issues is frequently thought to be dealt with globally. On the other hand, it is occassionally believed by some that each nation ought to be see to them rather than worldwide. Both sides of this argument will be analyzed before a reasoned conclusion is drawn.
First of all, some think that people worldwide should be responsible for finding solutions to environmental matters. This is because all the members in this enormous society including 5 large continents are currently living on the environment as one of the most indispensable part in our daily life. And green campaign is a prime example for this viewpoint. If it weren’t for the global responsibility, this would lead to the contamination of the environment.
Meanwhile, others think that it is beter to see to them nationally. Because in my opinion, they will believe that they only need to take their responsibility to their own country first rather than the whole world. This will decrease the quality of international unity. Hence, there would be not only no green campaign organised worldwide but also the co-operation between governments of each country to solve this common issue.
In summary, it is extremely clear that both viewpoints have strong ground. However, in my point of view, solving these problems on the global scale is better than nationally. This is because, with the help of all the nations around the world, saving our environment will no longer be the serious trouble for the humankind. Therefore, the environment quality will have a tendency to turn into the ideal place for all the creatures to live.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, so, therefore, while, in summary, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07920792079 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96700954854 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557755775578 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.2762064987 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5294117647 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8235294118 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94117647059 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229110272482 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713756188131 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652915362899 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128298139776 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0301236512557 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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