People today do not feel safe either at home or when they are out. What are the causes? What are the solutions?
It is true that many people these days suffer from unsafe feeling when they not only stay at home but are on the streets or public spaces. These are several causes of this feeling, and effective solutions should be proposed to address those fears.
To begin with, the perception that society is unsafe and people are at high risk at home stems from two grounds. The first reason is that acts of violence increasingly taking place in some places around the world have hurt or even killed many innocents. For example, a mass shooting recently at a campus of a university in the US killed at least five students. This violent event was soon broadcasted, which discourages people to stay in crowded places which are believed to be unsafe. Additionally, as many people in cities live in high-rise buildings, they fear that they cannot escape out of their apartments fast enough in emergency situations such as fire or earthquake.
Some effective measures should be implemented to deal with these root causes of insecurity. First, the authorities should impose law enforcement on banning citizens from carrying weapons such as guns or knives. As a result, citizens would feel more confident to take part in outdoor activities in public spaces without worrying about being violently attacked. Second, stricter punishments should be given to those who carry out criminal behaviors towards others, which will act as a deterrent to decrease the number of illegal acts in society. Final, advanced equipment of fire prevention and fighting systems must be deployed to ensure the safety of people who are living in a high building.
In conclusion, the feeling of unsafety among citizens happens because of increasingly violent acts and the inherent dangers in high building, and several actions need to be taken to address these issues.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, second, so, at least, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08970099668 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64025349363 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607973421927 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.333885597 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.846153846 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1538461538 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170270812464 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595627284052 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578977220141 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107148791 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0727513489942 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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