The claim that animals have "rights" has been subject to much of a debate since 1970. Are zoos helping or hurting animals? Should zoos be banned? Do you agree or disagree?
animals, although speechless are full of feelings, which is why their fundamental rights should be protected. many people believe that keeping animals in zoo is equivalent to denying them their basic entitlements. I completely accord with this belief and feel that their natural habitat is the correct place for them to live.
To begin with, in past few years, animals have become the source of entertainment and way to earn money. zoos claim to be the places where several creatures stay and are well taken care of. however, it has always been a matter of concern for animal right activists. many activists claim, that animals are brutally beaten and trained to put a show in front of audience. wildlife creatures needs open spaces where they can freely roam as per their will, nevertheless they live a caged life in zoo which affects their mental and physical health. Moreover, many a times, they are forced to remain empty stomach or not fed properly. they constantly have to face arrogant and demanding tourists who keep poking them in many ways to do things to amuse them. Recent study have also discovered that while living in zoo, the faunas get extremely dependent on their caretakers and even forget their own natural instinct or behaviour.
On the other hand, several people think that animals are safer in zoo as compared to their original environment. The risk of losing their lives in forest fires or scarcity of water and other resources is higher in forests as compared to wildlife parks. Additionally, several endangered animals are safer in zoo from the hunters who want to kill them for money. while in zoo, they also receive better medical treatments in case they fell ill.
To conclude with, animal belongs to jungle and not in cage. although, zoo provides several benefits and security, however extending the same privileges to them in their real habitat will ensure their well being and protect their basic rights.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-12-30 | aeropiyush | 89 | view |
| 2018-02-22 | Anonymous | 61 | view |
- Action movies with spectacular car chases are very popular with young people It is often said that these sorts of movies lead to increase in car accidents among young drivers as they try to copy what they have seen in films Do you agree that such movies i 54
- Modern communications mean that it’s no longer necessary to write letters.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 78
- The government should pay to the parents of very young children, so that one of them can stay at home and look after their children.What do you think are the pros and cons of this policy? Justify your answer and include any relevant examples from your own 84
- In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. 67
- The advent of the internet has made it possible for people to work from home. Do you feel this working arrangement has more advantages to disadvantages? Share personal examples in your essay. 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Animals
animals, although speechless are full of feelin...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 111, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Many
...fundamental rights should be protected. many people believe that keeping animals in ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 106, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Zoos
...of entertainment and way to earn money. zoos claim to be the places where several cr...
^^^^
Line 5, column 267, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Many
... of concern for animal right activists. many activists claim, that animals are bruta...
^^^^
Line 5, column 370, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Wildlife
...ned to put a show in front of audience. wildlife creatures needs open spaces where they ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 559, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a time' or simply 'times'?
Suggestion: a time; times
...tal and physical health. Moreover, many a times, they are forced to remain empty stomac...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 629, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...main empty stomach or not fed properly. they constantly have to face arrogant and de...
^^^^
Line 11, column 362, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
...unters who want to kill them for money. while in zoo, they also receive better medica...
^^^^^
Line 17, column 61, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Although
...imal belongs to jungle and not in cage. although, zoo provides several benefits and secu...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, while, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00613496933 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44981239887 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604294478528 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2748911901 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1764705882 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41176470588 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19200925384 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705894605032 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043603376325 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121979306352 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325813410737 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.