You live in an area where the local council has made some changes to regulations. You believe these changes are not good for residents.
Write a letter to a councillor. In your letter:
• Introduce yourself.
• Describe the problem.
• Say what you think the council should do about the situation
Dear Sir/Madam,
Firstly let me introduce myself, my name is Rana Kandar and i moved to Carlanton street two months ago. I am writing this letter in regards of the rule that you took the last month in relation to Metro availability during Weekends and public holidays.
In fact, we are facing many transportation issues when working hours of Metro have changed. As you know people will not have enough time to hang out during the weekdays since they spend most of their time at work. Therefore they wait for the weekend to watch theatre or celebrate a special event. Due to the shortage in working hours and because taxi are very expensive at the city, most people are staying at home.
I would highly appreciate if you solve the issue as soon as possible since it is reflecting directly on our humor. I can suggest some possible solutions that might help like decreasing taxi expenses of extending the working hours of the metro especially during weekends.
Looking forward to hear from you.
Yours faithfully
Rana Kandar
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 61, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...duce myself, my name is Rana Kandar and i moved to Carlanton street two months a...
^
Line 5, column 81, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... is Rana Kandar and i moved to Carlanton street two months ago. I am writing this...
^^
Line 5, column 131, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...wo months ago. I am writing this letter in regards of the rule that you took the last month i...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 215, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... they spend most of their time at work. Therefore they wait for the weekend to watch thea...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 17, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...y during weekends. Looking forward to hear from you. Yours faithfully Rana Kan...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, so, therefore, in fact, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 874.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93785310734 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45762062471 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.700564971751 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.728859547 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 4.34317383033 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113803729283 0.216113520407 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0458695729753 0.0766984524023 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039808794593 0.0603063233224 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0767737714702 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305751060724 0.0580467560999 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.