The gap between the rich and the poor is becoming wider.the Rich are getting richer and the poor even more poorer. What problems can situation some cause and suggest solution?
Life has undergone dramatic changes couple of decades. It can be observed that nowadays gap between the rich and the poor is burgeoning by leaps and bounds. Riches are becoming more and more richer, whereas in case of poor society it's gone below the poverty line.there are many problems occured because of this trend. I shall discuss various problems behind this phenomenon And also suggest some remedies to tackle this problem in the forthcoming paragraphs.
To embark with, there are multifarious problems
of the gap Between the rich and the poor. First and foremost, poor people have to do work as a slaves of the rich society, because they do not get good jobs so that they do work day and night as a labour in the big companies which are owned by rich people. By working day and night they get very less income by which they hardly afford the price of their basic necessities such as clothes, house and food.Due to which their living standard is declined day by day. Moreover if poor people do not fulfill their needs, it actually lead lot of stress and pressure on their mind.They face so many problems such as cardial diseases, HIV and cancer. Besides this, due to poverty, impoverished juveniles can not get good education which is key to get good jobs because of which they can not get good employment.Furthermore, when poor people do not get income to fulfill their needs, they tend to do nefarious activities such as stealing and crime in order to get money, due to which nation face so many problems.
On the flip side, there are some solutions to tackle this problem. First of all, authorities should take steps to mitigate the gap between the rich and the poor. They should open school and colleges for the impoverished society at the free of cost so that poor children can get good education and further in their future they can get good job opportunities. Secondly, more and more hospitals should be opened so that poor people can get good treatment at very low price.
Thirdly, government should impose the tax on the income of the rich people and this revenue again is used to uplift the life standard of the needy folks.
Laconically,it can be said that there are many problems created due to gap between the rich and the poor. but, some solutions should be taken by the authorities to uplift the level of the poor so that they can also lead stress free and enjoyable life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 187, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'richer' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: richer
...nd bounds. Riches are becoming more and more richer, whereas in case of poor society its go...
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Line 5, column 48, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rk with, there are multifarious problems of the gap Between the rich and the poor...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Of
...ith, there are multifarious problems of the gap Between the rich and the poor. ...
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Line 7, column 95, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a slave' or simply 'slaves'?
Suggestion: a slave; slaves
...oremost, poor people have to do work as a slaves of the rich society, because they do no...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ch people. By working day and night they get very less income by which they hardl...
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Line 7, column 358, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...h they hardly afford the price of their basic necessities such as clothes, house and food.Due to ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Due
...ssities such as clothes, house and food.Due to which their living standard is decli...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...living standard is declined day by day. Moreover if poor people do not fulfill their nee...
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Line 7, column 531, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'leads'?
Suggestion: leads
...do not fulfill their needs, it actually lead lot of stress and pressure on their min...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: They
...ot of stress and pressure on their mind.They face so many problems such as cardial d...
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Suggestion: Furthermore
... which they can not get good employment.Furthermore, when poor people do not get income to ...
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Suggestion: , it
...ard of the needy folks. Laconically,it can be said that there are many problem...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...e to gap between the rich and the poor. but, some solutions should be taken by the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, whereas, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1990.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 423.0 315.596192385 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70449172577 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52576106379 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.444444444444 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 599.4 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.2486753771 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.375 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4375 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340394793824 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145916222569 0.084324248473 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0943399407187 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187086838107 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.1063496786 0.056905535591 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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