With increasing use and development of new technology many machines are now able to do the work which people used to perform. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?
The impact of this phenomenon on individuals is profound. Currently, increasing and developing of new technology is available for everyone and these machines are able to do the work which people used to perform. I suppose I will definitely believe that the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages.
First and foremost it is very useful for the country with improving of new technology and creating more functional machines which play an important role on tenacity determination. Most of the robots are able to do the work instead of employees that can be more convenient and safer for the government. An inherent sense of disbelief is apt to ruin a telecommunicated negotiation when negotiators can only see videos of each other transmitted via the internet.
On the other hand,there are profound benefits of developing new technology which can open the way for people to use more comfortable facilities and devices which enjoyed all around the world.Here some countries with increasing potential and improving of new technology such as America,Japan,Korea and other major countries growth can lead to beautiful suggestion. <div>In conclusion, it is my opinion that new technology is increasing day by day can be beneficial and it plays an essential role in our life.</div>
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- With increasing use and development of new technology many machines are now able to do the work which people used to perform. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend? 56
- With increasing use and development of new technology many machines are now able to do the work which people used to perform. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend? 56
- With increasing use and development of new technology many machines are now able to do the work which people used to perform. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend? 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, i suppose, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1085.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 205.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29268292683 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31425274641 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580487804878 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 348.3 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.0338168025 49.4020404114 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.625 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.625 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.375 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370183203563 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154394438103 0.084324248473 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.146268253733 0.0667982634062 219% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.276293098431 0.151304729494 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135764121379 0.056905535591 239% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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