rite a letter to a friend who is looking for a part time job to support his studies. In your letter
- Describe the job you found for him/her
- Explain why this job is good for him/her
- Say what he/she needs to do to get the job
Dear Sara,
I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. When we met last week, you mentioned that you are searching for a part-time job to finance your expenditure, and this is the reason I am writing to you today.
Yesterday, I met my old friend, Prachi who owns a beauty parlor in Gachibowli. Her business is flourishing right now as many colleges have opened in a nearby area and so she was searching for an assistant, especially in the peak evening hours. When I mentioned that you were looking for a part-time job, she seemed very eager to contact you and talk about employment possibilities.
I thought this job will be perfect for you as you are free in the evening, and you have done certificate course in beautician, and is well aware of waxing, threading, and facials. The job will be from 5 pm to 8 pm and you will be getting around 5000 rupees plus incentives based on your performance. Moreover, if you work on Sundays, you will get extra income accordingly.
I hope this opportunity piques your interest. You can contact Prachi if you are interested in the job. Her number is 945903582.
With Love,
Richa
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, if, look, moreover, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 969.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70388349515 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73516013279 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616504854369 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.227694859 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.75 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1666666667 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.41666666667 4.34317383033 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328407723373 0.216113520407 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111318466057 0.0766984524023 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716880760963 0.0603063233224 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206502751578 0.12726935374 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305502033819 0.0580467560999 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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