International tourism is now more common than ever before. Some feel that this is a positive trend, while others do not. What are your opinions on this?
Tourism means travelling of the people to the different places, either nationally or internationally for the leisure, relaxation and sightseeing. In the modern era, with the easy of transportation there has been a significant growth of international tourism. While some people believe that it is a positive development, others opine that it has many negative consequences. I, however agree with the former and my reason will be explained in the following paragraph.
There are multifarious benifits of the developed tourist sector. First of all, it is not worng to say that tourism is the backbone of the countrys economy. Genreally speaking travellers from foreign land are willing to spend more money as compared to national tourist. They spend money of wide range of services like the food, transportation, accomodation and amusements. This boost the economy of the area and yield money. Secondly, its creates a wide range of job oppourtunities for the local inhabitants such as tour guides, hotel staff, chef and the market for selling the indigineous products. Thus, it increases the overall emloyement rate of the local area. Lastly, it leads to international connect which brings more business and cultural collobration in long term. This promotes cross-cultural awarness between the local and the tourist and build the bridges of understanding the cultural diversity.
On the other side, many people argue that international tourism have many drawbracks. Their primary concern is that the ancient monuments,the historic buildings and the temples often struggle to cope up with the increased traffic, resulting in damage. Secondly, it has negative impact on the environment as the natural resources are over-exploited. Moreover, the commercialisation of culture undermine the soul of the cultural destination. In order to lure public, presentation is very improtant and to present nicely some superficial changes are made. Lastly, the international tourist may knowingly or unknowingly disrespect to local norms. For example, in India when we visit temples, we remove shoes outside the gate and cover our head. A foreign person might not follow this and it may lead to cultural clashes.
To conclude, proper management and correct usage of tourism money by local authorites can eliminate these disagreements.
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, lastly, may, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, thus, while, as to, for example, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1973.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51117318436 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18206940237 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608938547486 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 618.3 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.9670962808 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6818181818 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2727272727 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77272727273 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14530617433 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0381744658722 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040721365531 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0809629066907 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035953881609 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.38 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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