Write a letter to a restaurant manager to organise a party.
-Why you want to give the party?
-What special arrangements you will need?
- Any relevant question.
Dear Sir,
I am Rachel, one of the frequent visitor of your restaurant, Glass Onion. Your resturant has a very good reputation, courtesy staff and delicious food. I am writing this letter to ask the availability of banquet hall from 6 pm onwards, on 13th December, as I want to organize a party.
The party is on the occasion of my son's birthday and there will be around 100 guests. So, the food and sitting arrangements need to be done accordingly. In the food menu, I would like to keep special vegeterian thali along with Chinesse appetizers. I will be glad to discuss personally about chef's speciality and to add it to the menu. I would also request a corner reserved for Dj and dance floor.
I need the ambience to be very pleasing and calm. I want to know if you could provide a decorations with the flowers and ballons. Kindly, let me know the booking amount and whether I can pay it through net banking as I am busy currently. I will be free to discuss about the arrangement and entire cost on the Sunday.
Looking forward for your response.
Yours faithfully,
Richa Mahajan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...r reserved for Dj and dance floor. I need the ambience to be very pleasing a...
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Line 13, column 24, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ance floor. I need the ambience to be very pleasing and calm. I want to know if you could p...
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Line 13, column 51, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... ambience to be very pleasing and calm. I want to know if you could provide a dec...
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Line 13, column 87, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a decoration' or simply 'decorations'?
Suggestion: a decoration; decorations
...lm. I want to know if you could provide a decorations with the flowers and ballons. Kindly, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 918.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68367346939 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69068688598 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65306122449 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.9553187503 44.8134815571 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 65.5714285714 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.21428571429 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157270173141 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0449663592065 0.0766984524023 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448043809675 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0728963215921 0.12726935374 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442535043321 0.0580467560999 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.27 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.