Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, people share various types of information on the Internet, including scientific research, government documents and business contracts. Whilst some individuals contend that it is beneficial for people to access much information, the others argue that parts of the information are not proper to be shared with the public freely. In my opinion, some of the information is so valuable that it has to be purchased by money or maintained confidential.
On the one hand, the exchange of information helps people to improve and get the results faster in many aspects. If students can get the access to the scientific papers freely, they can do their assignments anywhere without the school VPN or staying in school library. Moreover, students can find more references to optimize their reports or presentation. Also, the authorities are responsible to publish enough information, in order to protect people's right. For example, governments should show the report of resume because people who pay the taxes have the right to know how their government spend the money. A company should explain the financial statement to the investors in the annual shareholder's meeting.
However, not every kind of information should be freely published. Intellectual properties, such as books, movies, inventions, are the results from the efforts of many people. The people invest a lot of money and time to make results of high-quality. If the process of the work can be easily acquired or copied, it will be a huge lost for the creators. Therefore, some valuable information must be protected. If people want to know it, they have to pay the price.
In conclusion, although it is now a cyber age, which means individuals can share and get information quickly and freely, some information is too precious to be shared without purchase. Everything has its price, including information, so people cannot take it for granted and must value the intellectual properties.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: some
... with the public freely. In my opinion, some of the information is so valuable that it has ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s in the annual shareholders meeting. However, not every kind of information s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, as to, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1653.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26433121019 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99657160045 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554140127389 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0630990203 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2352941176 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4705882353 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47058823529 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29837065146 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0914411005616 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0980931193892 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203424936042 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114126054211 0.056905535591 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.