Some people think living in big cities is bad for people's health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is not rare to see people criticize city life for being detrimental to dwellers’ health. However, I disagree with this since I believe city life brings benefits for residents’ health.
Firstly, there are better infrasturctures and amenities in metropolis that can improve residents’ physical health. Surgeons and nurses employed in city hospitals are more likely to be experts in their fields, so citizens can receive professional medical advices and treatments. However, clinics in rural areas may lack the experienced doctors and well-developed healthcare facilities, which is linked to the fact that rural areas inhabitants tend to move to big cities for medical treatment when they are undertaking certain health issues. Secondly, there are higher chances that urban dwellers would live a more secured life than those of countryside, which contributes to a better mental healthy. Megacities provide ample opportunities, so it is comparatively earlier for people to get employed and earn higher salary, therefore affording a higher quality of life. If residents can earn a decent salary, they would have the money and freedom to pursue their dreams, which would also help strengthen their mental health.
Detractors of city life may argue that the increasingly intense competition in urban areas imposes a tremendous amount of pressure on residents, therefore promoting an unhealthy environment of anxiety in the city. However, people can not refrain from pressure in this modern society. While urban citizens suffer from competition, countryside resident may experience a financial burden, as less job opportunities are provided. So instead of trying to avoid from pressure, what people should do is to transform negative pressure into positive motivation, improving our knowledge and making ourself more socially competent.
To conclude, while urban life seem more competitive than that of countryside, living in big cities provides more merits to residents’ both physical and mental health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1731.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.69407894737 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10160739033 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595394736842 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6725371483 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.153846154 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3846153846 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198467283341 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732195158918 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05524240691 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133067441939 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491361314818 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.02 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.