Some people think that money is one of the most essential factors in promoting happiness.
Do you think people can be happy without much money?
What other factors contribute towards happiness?
People have been seeking to life satisfaction since the creation of civilization. According to the existing opinion finances being a powerful tool can provide that feeling. In my opinion, money does not lead to blessing because it can not guarantee health, love and other attributes of welfare.
To my mind, a lack of money does not always mean a tragedy life. Instead, the more money a person possesses the more problems it causes to them. For instance, as a recent research says poor Hawaii residents are considered to be the happiest people on the Earth. Those individuals usually do not own any property, some of them are homeless and unemployed but it could not prevent them from becoming the most satisfied people. For thus, funds does not influence a human life in direct proportion, instead a huge amount of money often brings problems.
It does not seem unreasonable to suggest that healthcare, family life and absence of stress often influence on someone feelings more than a full wallet. More than that, no one can buy love and healthcare no matter how rich they are, on the contrary it can bring wealth to life. For example, Tom Shadyac left his great career as a film producer, donated a huge amount of money and became a teacher after a car accident and he said to reporters "I am truly happy".
Taking everything into consideration, it can be concluded that in spite of that fact that many people will to be rich, material wealth is not obligatory to live happily. I believe that being health, loved and calm provides more ways to send the life of the dream.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 163, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'recent research'.
Suggestion: recent research
...ems it causes to them. For instance, as a recent research says poor Hawaii residents are consider...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, thus, for example, for instance, in my opinion, in spite of, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1327.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82545454545 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61720688919 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618181818182 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8956836623 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.076923077 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179734770817 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0584775833733 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0260446148397 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105166266925 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0214284593625 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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