You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months
say how your work could be done while you are away
ask for his/her help in arranging it,
Dear Sir,
I’m writing to you about my situation in nowadays. As you known it sir when I was a join this group I thought it’s perfect opportunity for me. Thus, now I want to take a change for this bid and perfect opportunity. I have being working in here almost three years therefore according to me now i’am ready to go our other head office in Swiss.
The working in Swiss is inevitable chance for each employee, However, also it’s vital for me because of the developing my second langue. Furthermore, if be able to go to Swiss I can arrange the affairs in here with assistance Jane. She knows everything about the company’s even the our customer.If she needs to some help about the anything, she be able to reach me any time in day.Also, with this temporary time she could be develop as a manager.Due, I believe you can help to me for this 6 months work in the Swiss.I will be success for each company.
Im waiting to your feedback and answer.
Your faithfully.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 44, Rule ID: IN_NOWADAYS[1]
Message: nowadays is used without 'in'. Use simply: 'nowadays'.
Suggestion: nowadays
...pos;m writing to you about my situation in nowadays. As you known it sir when I was a join ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 64, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[1]
Message: Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean 'knew'?
Suggestion: knew
... about my situation in nowadays. As you known it sir when I was a join this group I t...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 289, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'our'?
Suggestion: the; our
...verything about the company's even the our customer.If she needs to some help abou...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 306, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: If
...he company's even the our customer.If she needs to some help about the anythi...
^^
Line 9, column 356, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...ds to some help about the anything, she be able to reach me any time in day.Also, ...
^^
Line 9, column 392, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Also
...she be able to reach me any time in day.Also, with this temporary time she could be ...
^^^^
Line 9, column 457, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Due
... time she could be develop as a manager.Due, I believe you can help to me for this ...
^^^
Line 9, column 527, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
... me for this 6 months work in the Swiss.I will be success for each company. ...
^
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... will be success for each company. Im waiting to your feedback and answer. ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, second, so, therefore, thus, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 829.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65730337079 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73165455799 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623595505618 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.7485751364 44.8134815571 189% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.625 76.5299724578 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 16.8248392259 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.625 4.34317383033 199% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224395629942 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0968625879583 0.0766984524023 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453920333885 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1368802689 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355168888179 0.0580467560999 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.