Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
people often may debate this argument.No one can deny there is positive aspect of this statement. people with different duties during the working day is more productive and happy.Personally,however, i think that people withing the abilities of multitask projects security to others.I feel this way for two main reason,wich i will explore on the following essay.
First of all, some people nowadays have the advantage to use different instruments to complete the assaiment as soon as possible.Therefore,they like to manage all the duties an at the same time don't get borried.A compelling example of this is my experiece. Was about two years ago i had been taken a lot classes on the school my time was always very short, as the result, all the work that the professor given to me as a task i just trayed to push to finallize.Working at that pace trained me for my future job. finally , when i came out from my shield to the real word i noted that people with that tape of kills are able to find a job quickly. if i were never prepared myself for this, i will never get the great job that have now.
Secondly,Intelligent projection is the other development to the people who can do different jobs at the time.In ocationes people get impress by smarts people, but. They are happy and always in good mod. That projection make the others workers wants be around them. For instead. My brother was an enthusiastic employee. He frequently help the others co coworks.becouse this attitude he was promoted on his job. immediately he created a trained program for all the personal to show how multi task. With this programs people was more satisfied that before.Most important help tremendously with the company succeed.
In conclusion, I believe that lean how to do to many thing make ours life better and creative.The other peolple see that emotion on you.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, i feel, i think, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 318.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82704402516 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18010825465 2.67179642975 119% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606918238994 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.0356044095 48.9658058833 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.642857143 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 5.45110844103 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 39.0 5.5376344086 704% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152132879919 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0437170924071 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363495647069 0.0737576698707 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0822643534664 0.150856017488 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0234313667066 0.0645574589148 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 10.002688172 185% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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