In some countries and increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food.
In modern times the issue of healthy food has become highly controversial, because number of people like to eat outside of homes. It has been suggested that authorities take effective action on this type of meal. I partially disagree with this idea, in this essay I will provide some arguments to support my opinion.
There are variety of reasons why people suffering from disease like water pollution, air pollution and many others. Nowadays, air pollution is biggest problem in most of the countries. Two field are most contributing in air pollution, first day by day increasing companies and factories and second is, day-by-day rising private vehicles. Because of that increasing number of humans which is suffering from skin diseases , asthma problem and breathing allergy. These diseases patient is increasing everyday in the world.
Second argument, un pure water using for drink and consumption, which is very unhealthy for our body. Un pure water bad effect on our digestion and sometimes diarrhea and vomit happen for that. Apart from that, people do not care about their diet. They eat meal anytime, that is totally wrong for their stomach. People have no fix schedule for eating.
On the other hand, authorities higher tax receive on the junk food. That is working to some extent. If ready-made food expensive then, customers definitely think before buying fast food.
In conclusion, this is a topic which is very relevant to modern society. However, I believe quite strongly that authorities make food checking department which is available in the whole country. If the governments implement this policy, it will provide a better life for future generations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, then, apart from, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25925925926 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6650651273 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637037037037 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.3141529869 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.7368421053 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2105263158 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57894736842 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298348993123 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077085863753 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445651790798 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143337540412 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431928709159 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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