Some people believe that online courses have got more advantages than disadvantages. Do you agree or disagree with it?
‘Technology is a fire around which human race tells its story’. Gone are the days when people were depended only on schools or colleges for academic courses. Ever since the dawn of civilisation, world has gone through enormous changes and reaping benefits of technology and advancement is one of them. There is segment of people who opine that there are more advantages of online courses rather than disadvantages. Key advantages pertaining to given statement are mentioned and elaborated in following paragraphs.
To commence with, the root cause behind given topic at hand and given positive development is easy availability of technical gizmos and internet. Improved technology has made it easy to access online content like videos or video conferencing which is necessity of pursuing online education. The utmost advantage of access to online courses is flexible timings and learning. For instance, both students and professionals can reap its benefits; it is a merit, because students can enrol on additional syllabus simultaneously with busy schedule of academic studies. For working professionals, just one click during spare time of office schedule or evening classes can help them to access all the course material. An interesting argument is that even in remote areas, people can access same education and knowledge as provided to urban areas students.
Moving forth, although, lack of expert guidance can be barrier in learning courses as virtual learning experience without proper guidance of mentor cannot bring same results as compared to real teaching sessions, because Colleges and institutions prevails in availability of face to face teachers as per students requirements. However, merits of given statements outweigh its demerits as one can learn multiple skills by these online courses parallel, for example – using technological gadgets and being familiar with them, which further helps in both personal and professional growth of an individual. Virtual courses have made wider availability of quality education possible as mentioned beforehand. Various diplomas and certificate courses are not limited to educational institutes only.
In my opinion, people should change themselves with changing technology to learn about operating and handling gadgets so that everyone can reap the benefits of online education.
It can be concluded that it depends on us a rightful discrimination and wisely taken decisions would lead mankind towards a bright and bountiful future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2144.0 1615.20841683 133% => OK
No of words: 380.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.64210526316 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99257044016 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 176.041082164 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618421052632 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 684.9 506.74238477 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.7843809356 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.117647059 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3529411765 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.35294117647 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17607670851 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638287389326 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.084017390311 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0886129868157 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052526962977 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.73 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.13 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 78.4519038076 166% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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