Motorways help people travel quickly and cover long distances, but they also cause problems. What are the problems of motorways and what solutions are there?
Nowadays, as the need for speed from works and modern development arise, more and more motorways are built in order to meet our transport requirements. However, it is obvious that there are several disadvantages of constructing many highways. In this essay, I will discuss these drawbacks and also introduce some related methods.
First of all, the development of motorways leads to an increase in danger and risk for traffic users that create many unworthy accidents. For example, highways usually allow drivers to transport as high acceleration, meaning that if there is an accident that happens onto these roads such as collies, the consequence thus would be extremely severe. Moreover, the unlimited speed for highways can also result in a rise in air pollution and noise pollution, especially for nearly locations. As most of the cars nowadays working by burning fossil fuels that are seriously bad for the environments, they, as a result, release a significant quantity of carbon dioxide into the environment. Besides, these transportations are driven with very fast speed thus created many annoying noises throughout the day. For example, noises from the motor-machines when it runs are affected badly to the quality of educational buildings which need a silent space to work well.
Nevertheless, there are several effective solutions that can be used to tackle the problems above. A method for this is that governments can take an initiative to develop and pass severe regulations for the highway traffic or build logical and scientific traffic system that would reduce accidents. For instance, if the state intervenes, drivers, therefore, would ride more carefully. While it is a powerful approach to increase the safety of motorways, residents can also contribute in order to improve the environment closed to these roads by planting trees. Planting trees may be able to absorb a considerable amount of heat, carbon dioxide and restrict air pollution from car wastes. As a result, people who are willing to plant trees would not only improve the quality around high-speed roads but also help to build a better eco-system.
In conclusion, the drawbacks of these motorways are inevitable, but human thus has to think of using effective methods in order to overcome these disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1943.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3087431694 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92919239978 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571038251366 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 608.4 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0963853029 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.4375 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.625 7.06120827912 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0792786212525 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0272764486179 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0283748060296 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0530598803982 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0095712311694 0.056905535591 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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