Schools should do more to teach students about their health and wellbeing. Do you agree or disagree?
Educational Institutes must educate pupils about the long term benefits they will enjoy by leading a healthy life. This essay agrees that school should include physical education subject in their curriculum in order to motive children to adapt healthy habits. Firstly, this essay will discuss the impact of developing healthy behaviour on the physical condition and immunity system of children. Secondly, this essay will discuss by playing sports games and doing exercises will help them to be active both bodily and mentally.
By teaching students the importance of having a balanced and nutritious diet will not only enable them to get all the necessary vitamins and mineral essential in their growing age but also their body will be strong enough to fight against any diseases or infection such as heart diseases and stomach infections. Moreover, by eating fruits and vegetables will help to boost their energy and will improve their cognitive developement. As a result they will excel in academics and will build a successful and prosperous career in future. To elucidate, more than 50 percent of schools have initiated health education as a subject in order to teach children about the ways of leading a healthy life.
Furthermore, engaging children in various sports activities will help them to be physically and mentally active. By doing regular exercise will help them to not to become a couch potato, that is spending their entire day sitting on chair either watching television or playing computer games. Instead they will go outside make new friends which will eventually improve their communication, social and leadership skills which are necessary in their work life. Additionally, by sweating daily will prevent them from deteriorating their health such as obesity, diabetes and spine problems.
To conclude, I vehemently agree that schools must teach students about how to lead a health life, as they are the future generations and they should will be motivated to eat healthy and balanced diet and exercise daily in order to be physically and mentally fit and healthy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
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Suggestion: Instead,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 7.85571142285 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1760.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25373134328 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65706185915 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549253731343 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.27288849 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.384615385 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7692307692 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193461006193 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072131419296 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575698649472 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129962202909 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323727829922 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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